Kamis, 03 Mei 2012

Mid-Term Revision


Hafizh Wiratama S.
Animasi

B.      No.2

Paint-on-glass animation : a technique for making animated films by manipulating slow dryng oil paintsa on sheets of glass, for example by Aleksandr Petrov.


- Correction :
Paint-on-glass animation is a technique for making animated films by manipulating slow dryng oil paints a on sheets of glass, for example by Aleksandr Petrov.

- This sentence is Nominal Sentence.

- The Pattern of the text is Present Tense

S + to be + O +Adv

- Passive Construction :

A technique for making animated films by manipulating slow drying oil paints on sheets of glass is called Pint-on-glass animation, for example by Aleksander Petrov.

- Translation :
Animasi lukisan kaca adalah sebuah teknik untuk membjat film animasi dengan memanipulasi cat minyak yang ttidak mudah kering pada lembaran kaca, contohnya oleh Aleksandr Petrov.
- The reason :
Because the text explains the meaning of Paint-on-glass animation.






From my article :
Today, animator’s drawings and the backgrounds are either scanned into or drawn directly into a computer system.
- This sentence is not containing poor grammar and punctuation.

- This sentence is verbal sentence.

- The pattern is Simple Present Tense



- Active Construction :

Today, A computer system is directly scanning and drawing either the animator’s drawings and the backgrounds.

- Translation :
Sekarang, gambar dari animator dan gambar latar belakang, keduanya dipindai atau digambar secara langsung ke dalam sistem komputer.

-Reason :
Because the author tells the information generally.

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